the traitor in the ceiling let the sunlight in
lazy, sleepy sunlight which hadnt slept for centuries.
time! i hate time!
it covers all in its blanket of dust
weaving a spell of forgetfulness, making memories invisible
all but pain, for pain weaves its own magic,
time heals nothing.
each smile is a camouflage,
a crack, which lets a tear seep through.
if you look long enough,
then each thing beautiful eventually turns ugly
nothing is eternal but pain.
17 comments:
your poetry is so negative that its depressing ! isn't there enough sadness in this world already ? or is there no happiness in your life ?
of course there is happiness in my life, its just not in my poems!
on a more serious note, im normally a very cheerful guy, so wen im sad im REALLY troubled, and hence emotions take over and make me write such depressing pieces
Hi :)
The poem does indeed speak of a shady time :)
I do not think it's wrong or depressing to write about being sad. Without sadness we would never know the value of happiness. In your previous reply I can see that you know: Balance is the key :)
May flowers grow in all the corners of our beings :)
from emotions flows creativity...and it is at our darkest hours where art, like writing, serves as an outlet. And its cheaper than a shrink any day!
wow TOO GOOD!
Keshi.
Hah Pain, What is life if we dont know it
priya, marthyan you speak my language!
keshi...thanx
BAKWAAAAAAAAAAAAS !!!
K a S h U ;P
coming from u i take that as a compliment :-)
I only found the second line a misfit in this emotion-packed poem! :)
just a lil digression lovemarks :-)
awesome !!
love this line
each smile is a camouflage,
a crack, which lets a tear seep through.
sounds a lot like jim morrison composition
That's beautiful.
pain is truly eternal.....and i believe that what makes life beautiful.........:D
jim morrison... cmon anshul!!
iz.. thanx
cosmic... thanx to you too
Wow! I like the traitor in the ceiling.
dhiraj...it takes one to know one eh ?
dude good to see you after so long!
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