if only i could feel what you felt, and truly smile with you at times of joy. if only i could feel what you felt, and truly cry with you at times of sorrow. i would call myself your truest friend, if only i could feel what you felt.
grunt...to be 'the truest' friend dont i need to know exactly what u r feeling and going thru ? feeling ur joys and sorrows, ie understanding them wont make me ur clone. im sure there is more to the human psyche, watcha say ?
Hay.. u stole my feelings :) I always say this that if the person understands wht exactly going on in my mind, then he / she can claim to be my true friend. Okay.. they don’t have to be mind reader n all, but shud able to make out atleast that what exactly the current state of my mind is, when they meet me or hear me! I might not be able to put that in the exact words, but u have done it very well! I felt what u want to say here :)
I think that the fault might lie in your perspective... it might just be that the other person is offering enough hints but you fail to pick them up...
I feel that you need to delve deeper within yourself.
hmmm.. nicely said.. but its a point of contention.. for someone to be my true friend.. I should be comfortable in telling them how i feel. and even if they dont get it.. they shud always be thr for me.. but hving someone who "gets" you.. is well like the ultimate thing i seek.. but i feel it just dosen't exist..
Well said Gunshot... A perfect, true and admirable friendship you have related there...
However there is another kind of friendship that I see more often which I would describe like this...
If only I could be there, and watch your cheeks glow… If only I could be there, to dab your tears when they flow… If only I could be there, by your side for you to know… I would call myself your truest friend, If only I could be there… just there…
loved your blog. Will visit more often now. :-) Keep writing... Cheers! Minakshi
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If that were true, you would be me. My truest friend would be a compliment rather than a clone. Don't you think?
Thanks for stopping by my blog. I'm enjoying reading some of your posts as well. I like the subtitle especially.
grunt...to be 'the truest' friend dont i need to know exactly what u r feeling and going thru ? feeling ur joys and sorrows, ie understanding them wont make me ur clone. im sure there is more to the human psyche, watcha say ?
thanx cliff
I like your poems. You've got some talent.
freak...i like ur comment, it has some compliment :)
"if only i could feel what you felt"
thats whats lacking in our lives..We just try to stick on to our viewpoints...
short yet it conveys a lot!!
No, there needs to be some mystery surely?
Hay.. u stole my feelings :) I always say this that if the person understands wht exactly going on in my mind, then he / she can claim to be my true friend. Okay.. they don’t have to be mind reader n all, but shud able to make out atleast that what exactly the current state of my mind is, when they meet me or hear me!
I might not be able to put that in the exact words, but u have done it very well! I felt what u want to say here :)
yeah its one thing we cant do...FEEL exactly how the other person is feeling.
Keshi.
Nice.... :)
I think that the fault might lie in your perspective... it might just be that the other person is offering enough hints but you fail to pick them up...
I feel that you need to delve deeper within yourself.
hmmm.. nicely said.. but its a point of contention..
for someone to be my true friend.. I should be comfortable in telling them how i feel. and even if they dont get it.. they shud always be thr for me..
but hving someone who "gets" you.. is well like the ultimate thing i seek.. but i feel it just dosen't exist..
Well said Gunshot... A perfect, true and admirable friendship you have related there...
However there is another kind of friendship that I see more often which I would describe like this...
If only I could be there,
and watch your cheeks glow…
If only I could be there,
to dab your tears when they flow…
If only I could be there,
by your side for you to know…
I would call myself your truest friend,
If only I could be there… just there…
loved your blog. Will visit more often now. :-) Keep writing...
Cheers!
Minakshi
i am totally inept to comment on poetry..yet..i liked what i read ..:)
if only eh?
what a gift thay would be!
...'amen!'... ;)
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