Tuesday, April 29, 2008

Pearl in an Oyester's shadow

Clouds for a cushion
dreams for company
pink like strawberry ice-cream,
red like a valentine's teddy.

An afternoon nap,
in a summer day's lap
a white feather on a brown wing,
flapping against the blue sky.

Amidst the stars
dance the sun and the moon,
to celebrate his smile.

*dedicated to emaanchopra.blogspot.com


black coffee said...

white feather on a brown wing

very beautifully done. :)

Keshi said...

very very beautiful!

U write brilliantly Raghav.


der Bergwind said...

hey!! been 'not arnd' the gun-shot landscape for sometime but quite some surprises, pleasant ones at that! emaan's space is quite cool n hats off to u for keeping that beautifully, words-worth!! dunno man... but thatz like a whole new you out there (no judgement passing, just reading thru the frames written... cool!)read quite a lotta stuff on both the blogs, not much of gyan to render from ma side!! just enjoyed the reading thru emaanz diary... i guess its time to change ur blog tag line of gun-shot to something ... of peace :)
enjoy the ride!!

d SINNER!!! said...

:) nice one!!!

b/w thnx for droppin by and being critical engh...

m lrnin...:D

Mez said...

Thanks for droppin by my blog. just that i aint too actively bloggin these days..

Akshay said...

This is beautiful and so is Emaan!! Also you have been TAGGED....I tagged Emaan too...

Crimson Shimmer said...

lovely like soothing waters

Raghav said...

thanx crimson